Tempest
TempestSudden silence covers the land ascirrocumulus clouds descend.Electrical flashes ofelemental violenceignite the skyline,oppressivelypromisingnatures wrath.2002 Barry Weeder
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Oh this is good! Perfect form for this storm.Jan-------------------------------------------------------------Please join me at The Poetry Factory, The Creative Writer's Lounge or view my personal...
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I like the countdown "tempest... 9..8..7..6..5..4..3..2..1". Makes a great funnel cloud.
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Thanks. I'm glad you both liked this. Making it funnel was fun and easy using this form. BarryWe don't see things as they are, we see things as we are. - Anais NinJoin us at the Poetry Factory. :)The...
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Thoroughly enjoyed this, Barry...I can feel the weight of the clouds --we've been having several thunderstormsthe past few days...your imagery is right on! Lary
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Thank you Lary!. We don't see things as they are, we see things as we are. - Anais NinJoin us at the Poetry Factory. :)The Poetry Factory
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Excellently fitted form to contentI enjoyed the build up or should I say down to the wrath ivor
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